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POEM: Thirteen Line Valentine's Sonnet No.667
« on: October 28, 2010, 07:24:41 AM »
Thirteen Line Valentine's Sonnet No.667
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I see your face beside the water,
I see it in the eaves of trees.
I hear your voice in seagull torture.
I feel your hot breath in the breeze.
I taste you when I cut my mouth.
I feel you when I skin a bat.
I smell you in the garden air.
I hear you from the screaming cat.
I smell you when it's late outside.
I feel you through the wall that's thick.
I see your face inside your tock
Then stab it with my loving tick.
The End.
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Re: POEM: Thirteen Line Valentine's Sonnet No.667
« Reply #1 on: December 30, 2010, 08:23:33 PM »
I find it interesting how all the lines except the last are all pretaining to sensory in put. Then the last one is refering to LOVE!
Time is all we really have.

We do not own the earth. We are borrowing it from our children.

Is that what you really think? 

How many ignorant people does it take to destroy a planet?

Live & Let Live

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Re: POEM: Thirteen Line Valentine's Sonnet No.667
« Reply #2 on: December 30, 2010, 09:41:43 PM »
Thanks.  I wrote that around Valentine's 2008 when I was working as a CNC machinist.  (I also got to work with robots at that job.  Cool stuff.  My friend got to work with AGVs at a job he had, they are ultimate cool.)
http://www.google.com/search?hl=en&biw=1024&bih=608&q=agv+robot&aq=f&aqi=g1g-v1&aql=&oq=&gs_rfai=

Edit:
I remember that "tock" and "tick" were code words for the female and male genitalia, respectively.  Angst?  Angsty?  Emo?  *shudders*  Nah, I never threw my lot in with Emotism.
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